My second draft has gone fairly well so far. I have primarily worked on adjusting my context and introduction paragraphs as recommended by the first peer review we did last week. I plan to continue my revisions the rest of this week, focusing on the actual body of my paper. I am most concerned about my use of quotes from the primary text, as I have used a lot of block quotes in my paper. I will try to cut those out and incorporate them throughout my analysis more often. I am also concerned about the correctness of my MLA citations which I will also review. I will have to go back eventually and adjust my annotated bibliography as well, incorporating some other sources I found later on that have come to be integral to my analysis of Beloved.
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