I was thankfully able to crank out a completed first draft of my entire essay within the last week as I wanted to have all my ideas on paper in some way to be reviewed. I feel as though I have really nailed down the ideas and points in my paper, but I may need to revise and edit for clarity. Of the things that I think I need to revise most, I will probably focus on my introducing paragraph and conclusion. I might also review my background since it is quite long and I may not need all of it to make my later points. It was helpful as a reference point for later arguments since I tried to incorporate as much background as I could to see what connections I could make as I went.
I would most like to hear feedback on the clarity of the paper. It can get rather wordy at times, and it incorporates discussion about a religion which I am sure many people are unfamiliar with.
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